Suppose
you are to read
a convoluted text
such as the one
in front of you now.
You might find it
easier to read
short lines
with indentation,
such as a poet may do
and James Joyce
should have done,
and like a poem,
this text is formatted
to convey meaning
using a particular rhythm
and context structure
to demonstrate
that comprehension
might only be a matter
of presentation,
or as does a programmer,
who often indents
as a way
to organize logic,
although the syntax often produces very long lines,
or anyone
who writes an outline
or a table of contents
may use
short indented lines
in order to organize
related ideas,
because short lines
require less filtering
by our eyes and brains,
and we are less likely
to loose our place,
and conjunctions,
commas, parenthesis,
and other punctuation
may not be enough
to keep track
of relationships
between words
and phrases,
but this system
requires that a text
is scrolled
and is thus
more appropriate
in digital
rather than
printed form,
where efficiency
is more valuable
than brevity.
I may not have
faithfully recreated
the Visual-Syntactic
Text Format
as published,
but none the less,
I hope to have
demonstrated either
its annoying aspects
or its advantages.
What do you think?
Comments
I’m really struggling trying to figure out whether you need to stick your head in a bucket of ice water or if I should bow respectfully in your presence. I’m leaning towards the former, but until final decision is reached I’ll opt for the latter.